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Characterization   by   Mindy Fox

2/5/2013

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Great characterization, like every aspect of great literature is developed through its relationship to all the other elements of storytelling; point of view, theme, setting and plot. One influences the others and they all work together. Great characters fit the time and place of the story naturally but take them out of their world and place them into a different place, time and atmosphere and they may seem awkward. And so we see that great characters are not interchangeable from story to story. Even in serials, the author must always further develop the main character to fit the circumstances of the moment. Perhaps the main character is older, more worldly and wise, since the last novel. Maybe, the character has since been through a divorce and is now dealing with being back in the singles game.

Creating great characteristics is learned through trial and error and experimenting. No writer intentionally writes themselves into a corner, yet it happens all the time, even to the best of us. Call it an occupational hazard. Instead of blaming ‘Writers Block’ now is the time to challenge yourself to write your way back out of the corner. Try a new style or technique and see if you can remove the anchor or break through the road block that is impeding your tale from moving forward. By trying different techniques, we grow. The art of good creative writing takes a lot of effort and thought processes. There’s more to writing a great story than simply coming up with a great story to tell. Having a great story to tell is a good beginning. But, writing it so readers agree it is great is a totally different kettle of fish.

Creating characters who are dynamic, live life large, and are extremely likeable goes a long way with satisfying readers but the rest of your story must deliver just as largely too. Creating characters who intrigue your readers, get them wondering is even better. Creating characters who your readers want to know more about is the key to great characterization. The famous entertainer, Roy Rogers, known for being a very friendly, jovial, fun loving man, used to say. “I never really knew a person I didn’t like.” Now, unless Roy Rogers lived on a different planet than the rest of us; (I personally bump into people all the time I don’t like, at least once a day!) How can Roy’s statement be sincere? Roy Roger isn’t saying he likes everyone.  He is saying that if he doesn’t like someone then he hasn’t really gotten to know them yet. And yes, the famous actor was quite sincere when he said it. History books have recorded many instances of how he lived his life by this credo.

Now as creative writers, if we take Roy Rogers words to heart, we can conclude that if the characters we create for our stories are not working for our readers then probably we have not developed the characters enough. We haven’t allowed our readers to really get to know our characters.

Sometimes we have to approach solving a characterization problem by attempting new creative writing techniques and trying new writing styles. The more one writes, the more one’s writing evolves and the more confidence we have to take on more difficult subjects and projects. This means we will naturally encounter tougher literary problems which may be over come by the use of and exploration of more sophisticated literary techniques and unique writing styles. Remember the field of literature is vast, always growing and changing as man himself grows and evolves. Expanding one’s skills of characterization is the essence of expanding one’s over all story telling abilities.

Stories are about people. The most exciting stories are quickly forgotten if the reader was never made to care about what happens to the characters. But, engaging characters themselves are remembered vividly years after their story was read. How many of us can recall the story of Dracula scene by scene? Yet, when we hear the name Dracula, we all picture the blood sucking, aristocrat who sleeps in a coffin by day then comes out to turn into a vampire at night; the monster who hypnotizes his victim, bites their neck then turns into a bat for a quick getaway.

Just as people are complicated, so should your characters be complicated. People wear different hats and play different roles, so should the characters you write about. Knowing your characters thoroughly is important for any author. Deciding how much to reveal to your readers as well as how and when to reveal it, is up to you based on what you are trying to achieve or accomplish with your tale.

There are numerous styles of writing. Each presents its challenges to characterization but each also opens doors to further developing your characters too. For instance, you may choose to tell a whole story, every word, entirely through the inner thoughts of a single character. The benefits of this technique are your reader gets to really know exactly what your character is thinking all the time. In real life and with other styles of writing, people often act one way but really feel differently. We sometimes conceal our true feelings from others, going as far as to say one thing, while thinking the exact opposite. With the above writing style, you always know your character’s true motives, hopes and fears. You know when they are telling the truth and when they lie and you know why. Few other techniques come close to as fully exploring the inner workings of a character’s mind. The down side to using this style is you don’t get to hear anyone else’s opinions not even the author from the point of view of a narrator. And so we see, if our goal is to thoroughly explore what makes a certain type of character tick then we’ve found the perfect style. On the other hand, if we wish to depict the events of an historic incident then we may wish to choose a different writing style that allows us to show our reader more than just one person’s perspective on our subject matter.

As always with creative writing, who is telling the story and how they tell it, can often be as meaningful and insightful as the actual story itself. This is the mark of great characterization, when it works with other elements of literature and storytelling, in this case, the story’s ‘point of view’, to elevate the work to new heights and deliver more substance to the reader’s experience. Great characterization also works with ‘theme’ because the more we readers know about a character the more meaning each episode of the plot can have. And great characterization enhances the plot by justifying how people act and what they say from one scene to the next. Great characterization also makes the conflicts developed between characters believable based on their temperaments and inner make ups which we’ve already been pre-exposed to through characterization.  Great characterization also defines the setting, because any place and time is always defined by what people make of it. And thus we see how characterization affects all the elements of a story and how all the elements affect characterization. The best stories utilize all the elements and have them all working together in harmony, which is the real trick to writing a fantastic tale.

Tell us who your favorite literary characters are? And what makes them so endearing, loveable or despicable?

Who do you feel are the best authors at describing fictional characters? What do they do when they write that makes their characters come alive, that is unique?


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Great Literary Characterization  by Stu Leventhal

2/2/2013

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Characterization is how an author introduces his reader to the individuals staring in his or her story. This can be done by flat out, just telling us everything the author feels we need to know about someone. Example: John was tall, strong, 40 years old, rich, due to inheriting the family business. This method is quite effective at painting a picture of a person but can tend to become boring for readers after a while. And, for this reason, most literary critics view this straight narrative style as amateurish writing. It is much more entertaining to jump right into the action of the tale and let the reader discover that John is tall, strong, rich and middle aged through the incidents of the story which reveal these traits and more.

A character could say. “Move over Storky, You are blocking the sun light!” Thus, revealing John is tall. John could step out of a limousine, dressed in a custom fit designer suit, wearing 1000 dollar fancy tooled, cowboy boots to indicate to the reader, John’s wealthy station in life. The critics and writing teachers usually rate this style of creative writing higher on a scale of one to ten than just narrative. Although, straight narrative has her uses in creative writing too when applied at the proper time and in the proper dosage. There are no perfect recipes for any aspect of creative writing. Trial and error, re-reading and re-writing generally creates the best work. Authors who are expert in other literary categories, such as; creating engaging plots, dramatic, riveting dialogs, picturesque settings or relevant, emotional themes, will be forgiven by readers, if they lack the best skills of characterization since their work can be read and cherished for it’s overwhelming other values and vice versa.

It is easiest to approach learning fluid characterization by first writing everything out you wish your reader to know about each character narrative style so you can continue penning the story until your first draft is complete then go back and replace the boring, long winded narrative. You can tweak some narrative by changing it slightly into dialog the other characters speak rather than leaving it as something the author’s voice announces. Other traits can be shown through the action in the story. Example: John was tall and rich. The waitresses called him nicknames like Storky and Filet Mignon but not to his face. – could be rewritten as – “Don’t look now.” Sara pointed out the window indicating a big tall sharp dressed man stooping so not to bang his head as he climbed out of a long limousine. “Here comes a tall glass of Filet Mignon.” Notice how small bits of narrative are interspersed with descriptive dialog and character revealing action.

“Oh that’s just John Packard.” Mildred informed. “He’s handsome and harmless Honey. We all call him Storky. He owns half this town.” Sara combed her fingers through her blond bangs. “Flirt if you must but beware his third wife is very territorial and protective of her Sugar Daddy.” Can you see how different themes are developed and roads are plowed open for the plot to move in if the author chooses to pursue them.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         

Every time you introduce a new character into your story you open up many doors and new possible directions your tale can go. These directions or possible story development opportunities are limited when you simply state; John was tall, very rich, strong and handsome for a middle aged man. For this reason, the masters of characterization rarely point out specific one dimensional fact such as the physical traits of their characters using their narrator’s voice. The great authors know that even if they never intend to further develop some story line options, having extra story line possibilities make it more enjoyable for their readers who anxiously reads on, hungry and curious to find out what will happen next. Symbolism is often used to steer the reader in the right direction but room is left for each reader to engage their own imaginations.

In order to discuss this technique, let’s put ourselves in the shoes of a homicide detective who is trying to piece together a sketch of a murder victim’s life. Picture yourself in the victim’s apartment. Everything in the apartment gives you new insight into who the victim was. The type of furnishings, scream at you the victim’s personality. The art work the Vic chose to display on his walls and shelves reveal volumes about his character. The types of clothing you discover in the closet, the jewelry the victim owned, even the style of shoes add to the picture of who lived here. The books on their bookshelves tell you their interests. Their music in their music collection makes a statement of their beliefs and lifestyle. Is the apartment messy or very organized? Is there sports memorabilia all over the apartment? What is the overall tone you feel when you first stepped into the apartment? Do you feel welcomed? Is it bright and cheery or drab, gloomy and depressing? What neighborhood did the person choose to live in? Can you see how finding out information that describes a character through inference and symbolism can tell a reader a lot more than static narrative like; John was tall, handsome and rich?

The key is not to tell your reader what to think about a character. Instead, allow your reader to decide what it is your character is trying to tell the world by pinning her long silky, shiny bleached blond hair up on top of her head in a tight bun. What do her thigh high, leather boots really signify; a sexual preference, a cry for attention, insecurity and perhaps vulnerability based on over compensation or something else? A character’s identity is displayed by the choices he or she makes. Are they wearing a hat that is functional; blocks the sun, keeps their ears warm, protects them from rain? Or, are they wearing a hat that is a fashion statement or displays their loyalty towards a product, social group or sports team?

New writers need to be warned away from using tired clichés when displaying characteristics. Over used generalities are boring and come off as insulting to your readers. Dig deeper, your characters and readers deserve more.

Think about the image portrayed by a smartly dressed man, driving a Harley Davidson motor cycle, pulling into a reserved for president parking spot. The young man climbs off the shiny hog then leans over to reach into the side car to retrieve his briefcase. He walks towards the revolving glass door, the fingers of his right hand picking at his helmets chin strap. Isn’t that scene more intriguing than the usual tattoo covered biker wearing mirror shades, ripped jeans and dangling chains that can be quickly converted into weapons pulling off a rural road onto a gravel parking lot of a rundown road side bar then parking next to the usual row of other overly customized motorcycles. Are you more intrigued by the young business exec that drives his Harley to work or the Hells Angels type of motor cycle gang character? Who do you want to learn more about?

Remember there are different levels a creative writer can take characterization to. The author can simply state ‘John was strong’. The author could up his game by having a character in the story describe John:

Sheila puckered her lips then whistled to get the other waitresses attention. “Wow girls! Look at the size of the biceps on that man.”

“And he has a six pack too!” Gina the short brunette added, pointing out the window at the bare chested, deeply tanned, young man pulling a white t-shirt on over his head of short, chestnut hair.

“He’s a young Adonis for sure!” Cherie the older blond receptionist agreed as she quickly pulled her lipstick out of her pocket book then began applying a fresh coat of glossy, cherry apple red.

Taking characterization to an even higher more sophisticated level is a little, more tricky. It involves going deeper than just addressing the person’s physical description. For instance, what else does John’s having a great muscular physique tell us about the man himself? We can deduce he’s obviously health conscientious. This can be confirmed when he enters the diner then orders a fruit cup and a large orange juice while his slovenly, unshaved, over weight buddy orders eggs over easy, bacon crisp, rye toast and a tomato juice which he fully intends to spike with vodka from the flask he’s got hidden underneath his shirt. We can obviously tell that John into physical fitness. We can further show how serious he is about taking care of his body by having one of the waitresses over hear him scold his out of shape breakfast companion about his unhealthy eating habits. We can also infer that John is probably very driven since he has what it takes to first get so physically fit and then maintain his physique. This could be further confirmed and developed by dialog during which his buddy scolds him for being such a workaholic, warning John that if he doesn’t learn how to lighten up and enjoy life, he’ll probably have a heart attack despite all the workouts he does.

So you see, now we have taken a trait of John’s that started out as ‘john was strong’ and developed it much further. We see how just that one physical trait ‘strong’ can lead us into possible themes addressing healthy eating, over working, possible variations of the theme of ‘beauty is only skin deep’. We now have set up the option to pursue themes like physical strength verses mental strength. Many plots can also be developed now; One of the waitresses falls for the handsome work driven Adonis. She makes it her mission to save him from himself. Another waitress may start a romance with his slovenly Pal. By developing the sole characteristic of John being ‘strong’, we opened the doors for many smooth transitions of the story, giving us many options with which to move the tale forward. Just think about all the new possibilities for story plot development and themes that will be open for us to explore once we further expose who this strong, driven, health obsessed John person really is; what his inner thoughts are, what he dreams about, fears, what motivates him, excites him. Maybe he’s in such great shape because he just got out of prison where all he did for five years is lift weights in the yard and plot his revenge against his enemies who betrayed him. Characterization really can be a powerful asset when in the hands of a knowledgeable, skilled creative writer.


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